It was 4:30 am and I was already up and getting ready to go to the airport to drop of my sister, she was going to D.C for school and on the trip they saw the pres. and Justin Beiber and the Jonas brothers and lady gaga at the end of a presidential meeting ( they were about 100 feet away)! they went to alot of museums and they went to the Holicost one she got a lot of stuff there she said it was fun i am going in 8th grade too.
On her way to DC? Check your life book for ideas about horses! Ms. Schwieters
What i want more books to be about
I wish there were more books about what I like to do, like spend time riding and taking care of animals and things that have to do with animals.
I think about how much you enjoy books with horses as main characters, you could write a great one!- Ms. Schwieters
I think i will do a horse story i was thinking about that.
Where are your ideas from 5-6?-Ms. Schwieters
I think i want to do a story about a mustang in clouds herd, that gets caught and goes thru the possibility of getting euthinized. But is saved by a girl who buys him in time to save him but, before the girl could by him and before the horse was caught the girls parents would not let her get a horse but they had the land for a horse, so when they had a wild horse auction of clouds herd she went to it with her friend and one of her friends parents and the parent thought that the girls parents said she could get a horse.So the girl bought a black mustang with a star on his forehead with no socks or stockings. ( like what is happening to clouds herd right now by the government land people, they are euthinizing the herd if they are not bought because apparently there is not enough land to support them witch is not true because they have been thriving on the same amount of land for who knows how many years.)
Be careful. This sounds like a story plot. What about the character development? Why does this girl want to save the horse? What do her parents think about it? -Ms. Schwieters
Her parents say they cant take on a horse right now even though they have the land for it. and the girl wants to save the horse because she has always wanted a horse . but then she goes to the auction and gets the mustang telling her friends parent that her parents said she could get a mustang.
i think i want the girls name to be Maggie or something.
Careful, you are getting into the story. Take a step back and focus on the characters. Who are they? Why does this girl love horses?-Ms. Schwieters
She loves horses because her grandpa had some until he died and she used to ride them but when he died they sold them.
Where is your T chart? Even tough you are at band, you still need to do the work.-Ms Schwieters
I saved it but then when I logged back on it was gone.
My main characters name is Maggie, her last name is ??????????
she only has one best friend and her name is Katie and her last name is ??????????
External
brown hair about shoulder length
not really tall yet not short
always wears a t-shirt and shorts or jeans
brown eyes
light skin
Internal
- caring
-kind
- feels kind of lost or in her own world sometimes because she is a nobody at school.
-loves horses
-loves animals
-is her own person
-makes her own decisions
-favorite color is green
-doesn't expect much from other people
-cant really relate to her friends because they don't really like horses and they think she talks about them way to much when like one of them swims and talks about it ALOT but then she talks about horses not as much as her friend but then they still say she talks about them way to much witch makes her feel bad when that is what she loves.
-She wants to get a horse
-She wants her friends to understand her
-She wants to be able to convince her parents that they have the land for a horse
-she yearns to get the mustang
-she yearns for a true friend (except for the one she has that has horses)
-what gets in the way of her getting the horse is her parents don't think she will take care of it
-what gets in the way of her making new friends that like horses are there is no other pepole that like or have horses at her school
-what gets in the way of her making friends is everyone thinks she is an idiot because she loves cows, horses and nascar!
Lifebook entries
It was 4:30 am and I was already up and getting ready to go to the airport to drop of my sister, she was going to D.C for school and on the trip they saw the pres. and Justin Beiber and the Jonas brothers and lady gaga at the end of a presidential meeting ( they were about 100 feet away)! they went to alot of museums and they went to the Holicost one she got a lot of stuff there she said it was fun i am going in 8th grade too.
On her way to DC? Check your life book for ideas about horses! Ms. Schwieters
What i want more books to be about
I wish there were more books about what I like to do, like spend time riding and taking care of animals and things that have to do with animals.
I think about how much you enjoy books with horses as main characters, you could write a great one!- Ms. Schwieters
I think i will do a horse story i was thinking about that.
Where are your ideas from 5-6?-Ms. Schwieters
I think i want to do a story about a mustang in clouds herd, that gets caught and goes thru the possibility of getting euthinized. But is saved by a girl who buys him in time to save him but, before the girl could by him and before the horse was caught the girls parents would not let her get a horse but they had the land for a horse, so when they had a wild horse auction of clouds herd she went to it with her friend and one of her friends parents and the parent thought that the girls parents said she could get a horse.So the girl bought a black mustang with a star on his forehead with no socks or stockings. ( like what is happening to clouds herd right now by the government land people, they are euthinizing the herd if they are not bought because apparently there is not enough land to support them witch is not true because they have been thriving on the same amount of land for who knows how many years.)
Be careful. This sounds like a story plot. What about the character development? Why does this girl want to save the horse? What do her parents think about it? -Ms. Schwieters
Her parents say they cant take on a horse right now even though they have the land for it. and the girl wants to save the horse because she has always wanted a horse . but then she goes to the auction and gets the mustang telling her friends parent that her parents said she could get a mustang.
i think i want the girls name to be Maggie or something.
Careful, you are getting into the story. Take a step back and focus on the characters. Who are they? Why does this girl love horses?-Ms. Schwieters
She loves horses because her grandpa had some until he died and she used to ride them but when he died they sold them.
Where is your T chart? Even tough you are at band, you still need to do the work.-Ms Schwieters
I saved it but then when I logged back on it was gone.
My main characters name is Maggie, her last name is ??????????
she only has one best friend and her name is Katie and her last name is ??????????
External
brown hair about shoulder lengthnot really tall yet not short
always wears a t-shirt and shorts or jeans
brown eyes
light skin
Internal
- caring-kind
- feels kind of lost or in her own world sometimes because she is a nobody at school.
-loves horses
-loves animals
-is her own person
-makes her own decisions
-favorite color is green
-doesn't expect much from other people
-cant really relate to her friends because they don't really like horses and they think she talks about them way to much when like one of them swims and talks about it ALOT but then she talks about horses not as much as her friend but then they still say she talks about them way to much witch makes her feel bad when that is what she loves.
-She wants to get a horse
-She wants her friends to understand her
-She wants to be able to convince her parents that they have the land for a horse
-she yearns to get the mustang
-she yearns for a true friend (except for the one she has that has horses)
-what gets in the way of her getting the horse is her parents don't think she will take care of it
-what gets in the way of her making new friends that like horses are there is no other pepole that like or have horses at her school
-what gets in the way of her making friends is everyone thinks she is an idiot because she loves cows, horses and nascar!